All Comments on 'Renee and Her Brother Ch. 02'

I thought Renee was his sister?

Sister? Mother?? Mother/Sister??? Sister acting like a mother????

I must apologise for the mistake I made in the last chapters of this story - I got a bit carried away and inadvertently put 'Mom' instead of 'Sis" - Renee is Ryan's SISTER. - thank you - Jena121

The action is developing well, as your writing progresses, but personally I would like to read more of a build up to get my juices bubbling before their climax. Tell us about the lust in their heads, the desires that over come the taboo. keep working on your efforts you have real talent!

Oediplex

Mother or sister? Only a little slip of the pen. And it does nothing to spoil a real torrid tale of two lovers.

Well done Jena

the brother and sister changed to mother and son at the end

I thought this was a brother and sister - now she is his mother?

The story is beautiful!

Don't worry about the mistake Jena. Things like that happen...

Just edit it and correct the wrong words. If you don't know how to do it, please read this: https://www.literotica.com/faq/05235347.shtml#05313767

Continue sharing your creativity with us.

Yeah, not very realistic unless Renee married her husband at 16 years old. 🙄 Three fully grown kids out on their own and mom's only 42 years old? Let's do some math. For the sake of argument, we'll assume that the youngest child is 18 and just moved out as the first chapter is beginning. When making a family, most doctors are going to advise that you separate your pregnancies by 3 months from the last birth until the next conception. So while it's theoretically possible, it's not really believable. 45 and older would have been a lot better.

I couldn't even get past that opening explanation before deciding that I have been tortured enough. I'm not wasting my time any further. I'm sure you appeal to a number of other readers whose tastes are not as picky as mine though.

How did Renee become mother on the last page? Other than that, an excellent story. 5/5