All Comments on 'Resistance After Nightfall'

c3a6If it went more slowly. Why did it have to progress so quickly from the beating to having him "thrust into her"? Wht no extended playing with her breasts, her nipples, with his actions and her reactions described in detail? Then similar, extended touching and feeling her thighs and belly -- again with descriptions of his actions (and how it all felt to him) and her reactions again. All getting her to the point of -- but not achieving --orgasm.

And I for one would have liked it better if her first orgasm was as a result of his mouth. Then, and only then, should he fuck her; but even then, no quick thrust, but slowly until she actually begs for it.

i agree u could've played it out a bit longer and had a greater effect but for a short story it was great...