All Comments on 'Resistance is Female Ch. 01'

Good old fashion nonconsent story. I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks.

I just couldn't read beyond the first sentence. Over three lines and no punctuation? Deary me. You need to work on your writing skills. Basic skills, like when to punctuate and when to end a sentence. The you might write something worth reading.

I'm sorry "Anonymous" didn't have the courage to sign his comment about puntuation because s/he will probably never read how much I disagree with him / her.

As an experiment I copied and pasted the first three paragraphs and asked my version of 'Word Starter 2010' for grammar guidance. It didn't make a single correction!

Great story by the way, look forward to chapter 2.

Boring.

Needs work. 2 stars.