All Comments on 'Retired Life Ch. 01'

I am looking forward to your continuation, please hurry.

Great story. You need to watch your spell checker. even though the words are spelled correctly, they may not be the appropriate word. Try a warm body editor.

This was a freaking hoot. The buildup was great the story is fun I hope the other chapters are as much fun.

There are a few words scattered throughout that look like they were they were "autocorrected" incorrectly.