All Comments on 'Retraining Ch. 05'

by RoughWriter

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joodlejoodlealmost 12 years ago
Go on

Please complete this story! It is beautiful, in a word. I have never called a Lit story beautiful. I could write a nice long review, but really there is nothing more to say, except please continue this series!

kajira_girlkajira_girlabout 12 years ago
as always

Wonderful! You hooked me with your first story, this one is just as hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
more..encore

More of Jack n Kelli...can't get enough of them ..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

i love this story, cant wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please continue!

I must say that I'm enjoying this - hope you continue it further. There's probably going to be bad days as well as good as Kelli learns what a real Dom is like, but Jack seems more than up to the task.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Wow I love this story can't get enough.

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