by RoughWriter
Please complete this story! It is beautiful, in a word. I have never called a Lit story beautiful. I could write a nice long review, but really there is nothing more to say, except please continue this series!
Wonderful! You hooked me with your first story, this one is just as hot.
I must say that I'm enjoying this - hope you continue it further. There's probably going to be bad days as well as good as Kelli learns what a real Dom is like, but Jack seems more than up to the task.