All Comments on 'Retribution: Sub Style'

by darklover1975

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CinDeeLee18CinDeeLee18over 19 years ago
Hot...Very Hot...

I really enjoyed your story. BDSM is something I am begininng to dabble in in my own writing, and I found that this was an excellent story to get the feel of the mood that I will have to create to be believable, to turn my reader on. You write like a, well, Master... Thank you dark, thank you very much.

lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
I like the way

you write, BDSM isn't my thing, but you have a very smooth way of telling the story...nice...

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