by kinkeebaby
Interesting premise.
But the sex is too abrupt.
Needed some more 'convincing' to get him to be willing to engage with her.
Perhaps her describing how she'd play with his cock. And how she'd give him a blowjob.
Touching herself and describing how good he'd feel if he were doing the touching.
Too quick.
Three stars.
I hope Rian has a sister who Grace treats equally well. (I volunteer to play the part of either Grace or the sister. ;) )
Well done, good use of detail. and your username...not kinky at all! I look forward to more submissions from you!
Great story. Full of detail and passion. Please continue writing about these characters.