All Comments on 'Risque River Day'

by Ember Faye

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MaverickManMaverickManabout 19 years ago
great story

I probably shouldn't be posting comments, since I was involved in editing this. But I thought it was a great story in the unedited version as well. Wonderful imagery, made me want to be there with you.

JennxxxJennxxxabout 19 years ago
Well done!

I thought it was very sweet yet entirely sexy at the same time. It's nice to read something that doesn't turn me on by it's shock factor. Well written Ms. Ember.

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Nice.

Tastefully written with great descriptions and atmosphere.

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Just a geeky gamer gal. Use to have the writing bug when I was younger. Haven't had it for a long time. I hope you enjoy the erotica I wrote when I was younger!