by emoboi
This is so hilarious it kept me in stitches. It absolutely just made my day. I really really liked the comical parts. When do we get to the really really good part? I think I am going to love it. Please hurry.
Ok what's up with their names?! Are those names the narrator gave them?But so far the story is really good.
wht's up with their names? o.O and awesome story btw can't wait 4 the rest ^.^
Write more please i love this types of stors that dont go straight to the sex :O
It'd be wonderful if you continue this storyline - it's cute and going so well thus far.
I love his little, semi-catchphrase. The one that ends each chapter... "Everything's gonna be alright. Right?! "
Please finish!! Its such a good story, and I can't wait to find out what happens next <3
We are all waiting for the rest of this story. Its been a while since u posted the last chapter. I love it PLEASE,PLEASE MORE
are you ever gna finish this story?!!! Cuz i would just love it if you did!
Please cont the story i loved it so so so so so so much and would really like to hear more.
Oh come on! You can't just leave it at that??? Where's the next part?