All Comments on 'Rolling in the Meep Ch. 03'

I like the sequel series so far. How its expanding to our world and the possibilities once it gets into the mermaid home is exciting.

You asked about chapter length. Short worked okay for the first two chapters because they ended at a solid stopping point. This one kinda ended mid-scene which I personally don't care for. To me a chapter needs the foreplay attached to the action. Otherwise the scene as a whole will probably be unsatisfying unless I come back and read this part over when the next part comes out.

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The title always made me wonder but now that they are going to the colony i kinda figured it out because before amarisa could talk all she said most of the time was meep. ps.i love your story's. pss. I forsee a lot of meep's in the future of this one.

I love your stories but there always a little to short and I feel like its rushed