All Comments on 'Romancing the Cashier'

I was reading and loving the story like I do most of your work and then all of a sudden - wham! Wasn't expecting that ending. Nice story. You are a keeper Marie.

i loved it so good, i never had black till i was nearly 40

would not have had the courage , nice story keep it up

with a gut-twisting end. A real delight. Thank you.

just wonderful. So glad you wrote this story. Even more glad that I had the chance to read it.

It is rare to find a story so real, so without a false note.

when is a woman like this character a keeper ?

Good story a real surprise, i enjoy ur true or mostly true stories very hot and erotic, makes me want more black cock

Thanks as always for reading and especially for taking the time to leave a note behind. That goes for my constant companion Anonymous as well. There's nothing you could say that would take away the joy I get from the wonderful comments I get both publically and privately, especially your pithy critique of me that reeks of post-orgasm remorse.

Thanks again all.

That was the funnest line in your story. LOL#1

Keeper of what?

turn on for me , well done also, i just wish i had this experience as a young girl such a sweet black cock story , always so nice when the guys r nice and sexy, so far all my black guys have been and still are each time i see them

looking for more hot bbc tales

keep up good work , and keep enjoying black cock

so hard to be with out it once u get it and learn how wonderful it can be

of course i remember my first black cock just like her WOW it that real

just luv reading about a much older black man with gray hairs and a much younger white girl in their teens...it's so hot just picturing the young girl getting fucked real slow then hard and its just a turn on specially if the girl is blond and virginal..keep up writing stories similar to this one

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You may have noticed this cute comment left by Anon...

"Black Gentlemen ???

That was the funnest line in your story. LOL#1"

So cute. I'm flattered that you took the time to take off that pointy hat to comment on my story. And you voted 1 star! Oh no! I'm crushed. Please vote some more, again and again. I don't give a damn about the score but if it keeps angry sickos like you off the streets I've done my job. Maybe the Grand Wizard could explain the meaning of the word fiction, if he knows.

Wow, to think I thought my life was in tough shape.

To everyone else, thank you. Really. Your comments private and public make everything like that worthwhile.

It's funny, I just discovered I have sort of a thing for older black men. Then I came on here and saw your story. You are a really good writer. :)

awesome story with a nice ending keep up the good work . It was different a nice story instead of the hoodlum type all the time. about time somebody portrade a blk man as a nice guy

its nice to read a black white story without exagerations...an interesting story with normal people....a nice read.Keep up the good work...

A really enjoyable short story. Thank you.

Getting ready to start my day, but first I thought I would read some Lit and I found your story and was very glad I did! I thought it did a great job keeping me interested and pulling me a long... it was a fun ride!

Really nice and warm and sexy, not to mention the fur which I adored.

A very nice 'love' story between two people in need. Their color difference seemed to be the only difference and it never overplayed the emotions each of them had. Very nice indeed.

I got my first bbc just after my 18th. Id been cashiering as a restaurant where my 42yo "Aaron" would tip my chin up to look at him when he said hi to me :) id blush and he knew that smile made my pussy quiver. He waited until i started hugging him a little longer and got the message when i nibbled on his neck and asked for a ride home. It was towards the end of winter when he stood in his open car door, bent me over, and made me squirt all over my leggings :))

i've loved him for years after and the note at the end of your story made me cry. 10/10 great read

The story was decent, it looks like you actually get someone to help you edit which is awesome! not sure why you feel the need to keep commenting on other peoples comments especially since you said you don't care if you get one star or whatever so that's actually cringey and annoying.

Did Aaron knock Marie up??? Did she keep the baby???