All Comments on 'Romancing the Ravishing Redhead'

I actually thought that you could write a non-incest story. I guess I was wrong.

Boyd

I've read this story before.

Just can't remeber if you wrote it or another writer.

Stil its a nice one.

You hit a fly ball, to left field. Unfortunately it went foul. Story started out strong, then there were so many twists and turns that it lost me. Classifying it as a romance keeps the ending from being known, but maybe the ending should have been rewritten.

I've read this before and it sucks now as much as it sucked back then

Well hell I am looking forward to the next hurricane now! Your stories are just incredible.

to bad ur going down in fantasy football yinzer.vegas dawg

I neglected to mention the contribution of my muse, James R. Scouries Esq., to this story. He is Literotica's leading authority on hurricanes, what with his swimming with the Dolphins, and other orgasmic matters. And check out his new story (author name = scouries) entitled "In Uniform . . . In Mom." It is so romantic! He is the best Romance author on this site, although he does not put them in that category, because they are family romance. Go black & gold! If any more Browns fans post comments, I'm going to delete them.

Sarahhh has again written a wonderfull story. The plot is believable and the words paint vivid pictures in the reader's mind. This is a must read.

Blow the man down.Worked for me.SteelerRonn from My space

Seriously, it was a great story, right up until the end. (Well, except that Sarah's "oh, God, we're gonna die!" got to be a bit repetitive.) But that last half-page or so, with things so patently out of character for a virgin, and then it turns out to be his daughter....... It just lost plausibility at that point. Sorry.

-- KK in Texas

I started reading story here a couple weeks ago and just registered yesterday.Your stories are the best I have found by far.So you get my first comment.I love that I Love Dick series.Not a Steelers fan but a big Santonio Holmes fan.Not a Browns fan either.Go Bengals!

You have reached a new milestone. This is your best written story to date... with all your usual erotic twists.. Kudos. Paul

If only Conneaut Jim could have taken your cherry. Oh well.. Great story as always. Will email u soon

what i wouldn't give to be Jim!! another great submission, would love to read the details of the 3some with Mrs. Jim (hint, hint)

The critics would hail this true love story involving incest? Seems a bit far fetched..I mean you always have me with Sarah...I am so weak for redheads, but you lost me at the critics. Lucky Jim...

MNGentleman

Sarah, You did it again, getting this old man all worked up with a story or erotica! Lars

I want to read more.

Your work continues to inspire me. Here's a poem for you from Michael R.

Does a coastal man or woman fear the winds that blow,

Fill the sails and to all manner of places the ships will go?

Maybe the twisters that may be known as water spouts,

May cause the weak to reef and turn about,

But a good wind into the delta will excite the mind,

All worries of chaos soon left far behind

And when the sails reef and ship glides into the dock,

All men would want to read slowly, each page without a marking clock,

Many too shy passions not to share would feign to vote,

Slowly amble back to one's favorite boat,

Save a poet, save a romantic muse,

Wanting a prose to take on a romantic cruise,

Where prose couples with rhyme

With or without the Corona and lime,

Only the coupling of rhyme and prose,

And the dew of a tasty inner rose.

Brilliant as usual,Sarah.Fun, witty,sexy, and I love all the details.Keep writing and I will keep reading! Thanks,Christopher

the recent storm that hit FL brought me nothing like this. But the hurricane season is'nt over yet. Maybe I'll get a chance to pop a cherry yet.

That's my kind of romance! That was actually quite sweet in your own inimitable, lusty, and let's not neglect, incestuous, style.

I was relieved that Gustav was going to miss us, but I didn't realize the treats that a man mind find in a storm.

Great work once again.

Thanks

great until the ending. Not so sure about the incest part or the spanking and threesome. The rest was well written and very sexy.

how you keep cumming up with one awesome story after another.I luv the incest always the best part.Wish I was you daddy,Donny

Sarah, this was so steamy! Had me sweating and rock hard. The hurricane theme is timely and made it an entertaining read. I want more! Great job, sweetie!

- Len

as always Sarahhh,wonderful....erotic and stimulating in

every way. well written with a unique twist on the incest

theme

they say a hurricane has an eye....Sexy Sarahhh shows it

can have two

you are such a fucking tease.omartinez

I hope you do because you certainly please the thousands and thousands of readers who flock to your stories! You've clearly raised the bar for those writers who toil away in ROMANCE CATEGORY land... Having just gone through (and suffered from) Hurricane Fay down here in Florida your story comes as a pleasant surprise. I'm now eagerly awaiting Hurricane Sarahhhh... now that would be a blow job worth getting in line for. I'll definately leave the shutters off and the windows open for you young lady...love Jim and Gabby down in Miami

This is one of the best I have read everyone needs to read this

A sexy romantic titty twister story.......loved it.

Sarahhh is wonderful! She is also an awesome writer. Sarahhh, your stories are erotic and I enjoy reading them.

A sexy sweet combination of scenes and emotions. Sarahh as always you are the playful tease with a story to arouse!

Really loved it Sarah

Wish you were here so I could put you over my knee and spank you just thinking about it has me hard again.

Scott IL.

Sarah, you are amazing... this story is so exciting.

Keep these stories cumming.

This is an erotically stimulating story written by one of the best writers on the internet.

Sarahhh's creativity is mind blowing. Her adroit use of words and her skillful constuction of scenes makes the story come alive. Sarahhh should be worshipped as a goddess of literary eroticism. I love reading everything this woman writes.

that was completly great! i loved it! you really know how to Suck someone in and keep them going till the end!!

Sarah My ...... FAVORIATE SLUT Girl, You've

done it again lady!!

I beat off 3 time's/cum twice and want

MORE!!!

Can I Spank You.....you Naughty, sexy Girl

Doing Your Daddy!!!!

LOVED the pic Sarah (ALWAYS DO!!) and NOW,

Where is the "POST TITTY TWISTER Pic" ??!!!

YOU Sarah ARE.......THE BEST there is on

here Gal. Whats Next sarah??, Whats Next & WHEN!!!?

Daddy Mac Gonna Have To Spank You....You

Sexy, Naughty Little Girl!!! We ALL LOVE

YOU SARAH.

--- -Your # 1 Tenn. FAN.....TittySucker!!-- --

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Such a nice and naughty story! I was tensed from the first line to the last one. Sarah, how can you write such wunderful experience! I'd give anything, if I could save you. Your Thanks are so exciting - I would give you as much as I could. Let me be your Daddy, Sarah!!!

That one Heaven Cant Wait you wrote had me crying at the end. Wow what a story. So beautiful but so sad. I love your stories especially ones like these. Thanks for writing them, Katie R.

both you an the story.only thing missing is you didnt strap it on and do daddy in the arse.lol.keep it up cuz you do me.tt

Your cherry, that is. This story is too sweet and romantic. I like it when you are mean and nasty like in "My Husband Sucks." Just kidding.

Hi sarahhh,yet another great story and plenty of sex and good story line. I think us men look forwards to your stories as we never know what things your titilateting us with keep up the great work. tonykelly77@hotmail.com

Sarah: Hope you've started packing for your move to the Frozen North so you can read me bedtimes stories. luvya, cbalaska

Touching and sexy all at the same time. Well written, easily read, and I enjoyed it very much.

Back in my meeting...

I read your Ravishing story on my phone as the meeting began. Your stories normally get my hard but this one made my cock so hard I thought I'd break a blood vessel!

So I excused myself, got up with a circus tent bulging out that was very obvious, and went to the men's room, took out my dick and had such an intense orgasm my head slammed into the wall and almost knocked me out!!

Splashed some cold water in my face, walked back into the meeting (yeah, I saw wandering eyes looking at my lowered tent) and am starting to get hard again thinking about the story. Damn!!

Sarahhh... you are really hot as hell... I saw more face than usual on this pic today...This story was so hot... And I love it when talk about jacking a guy offf with your soft hands... and you giving your magnificent blow jobs best...Yoy always make me feel good Sarahhh... ty... Larry

once again couldn't help but love the story. you never let me 'down'.

oh my god i've never wanted to be fucked so much in all my life my panties are soaked i'm horney as fuck i'll have sex with the next availible man or woman no make that men amd women!!! shit i'm horney.tonya

She came, she saw she conquered. Touching story .. well at least it got me touching myself ..

Love ya work.

Sarahhh never ceases to amaze me. Great story. Keep em coming.

Another great story from the mind and pen of Sarahhh. Great job!

Well,Sarah...unusually free of sex for the first part ,but then it got hot as it always does..I'd love to be Jim..you continue to amaze me..and reading it all through made me anticipate the sex part and that was so good...next time there is a hurricane down south.let me be Jim..I'd love to be rewarded like that for saving your life...all very hot as usual..you have a special gift...love it as i love all your hot and well written stories..Thanks Sarah... Mike

I had to turn up the air conditioning. No hurricanes in my neck of the woods but I could go for one of them there other blow jobs. Gr8 story, Sam Bo

I initially thought the story started a little slow, but oh my god, what a buildup. Damn, I love the way you write. That got me very excited very quickly.

Delicious! ;-) I loved the last 1/3rd, but seemed a bit hurriedly written. I thought certain passages at the first were just lifted from the label of the wine bottle, for example. But the saving grace was your premise, including Florida, etc. Nicely done. Pity I kept imagining Lindsay Lohan as "Sarah," instead of you (latest picture). Must be my problem. And, nicely woven-together, the previous girlfriend, etc., child not known, first-to-pluck-/fuck her, etc. Very Nicely done,I'm a nice 6"...need to cum

YourwritingissorealandsoverydescriptivedearSarrah.Congratsonanothergreatstory,Jim jimbol@cox.net

Beautiful story with a wonderful mix between the erotic and the romance. The ending was a surprise and well hidden. This is a "must read" for people that enjoy erotica with a really good story line.

now that was hot!!!! ist one i read of yours.now i am off in more ways than 1 to read cum more.rooster loves redheads

but relied too heavily on the cheese factor for my taste, especially at the end where it curded up. That might be just me though.

You are one beautiful redhead and someone I would love to make slow passionate love to and implant my seed

that was awsome!! i dont often envy another guy but damn ... jim is lucky!!!! soo, are you a vergin? ah well i guess not now lol! keep them cuming and i sure will !!!

It was a nice blend of sexy and ridiculous. The sex was hot but the plotline definitely took a few turns toward absurd. Either way, a good story!

the beginning started a bit slow, the end a bit hurried, but all in all, a well mix of erotic and romance dancing together on paper. When I got towards the end, I kind of thought that she might be the daughter, and I was right. well written!!

from my favorite author. Yes, I like this one the best of all your amazing stories I have read. I would list it as a favorite too if only I could log in. GerryCPA

The first 3/4 of the story was funny, sexy and worthy of being published in erotic magazines. I won't beat a dead horse (no pun intended) and again discuss how I feel about the rest. You know my opinion. I'm waiting for you to allow your considerable talent to be the showcase, not the shocking subject matter.

Hello sweetheart! I remember this story from a long time ago. It's still very good and brings this old man's cock to raging erect every time I read it. Of course this does bring back my memories of making love to my daughter, taking her virginity and now making her pregnant. I look forward to our child.

By the way, our mutual friend, Lee (the asian girl from your school) stopped by the office to inform us that she too is pregnant with my child. We are going to have happy little feet running around this house again!

Thanks for the photo, as I can see a little roundness in your perfect little tummy. I love the tiny bit of hair on your pussy and can't wait to lick it! Hurry Home!

Love always,

Daddy

Hello sweetheart! I remember this story from a long time ago. It's still very good and brings this old man's cock to raging erect every time I read it. Of course this does bring back my memories of making love to my daughter, taking her virginity and now making her pregnant. I look forward to our child.

By the way, our mutual friend, Lee (the asian girl from your school) stopped by the office to inform us that she too is pregnant with my child. We are going to have happy little feet running around this house again!

Thanks for the photo, as I can see a little roundness in your perfect little tummy. I love the tiny bit of hair on your pussy and can't wait to lick it! Hurry Home!

Love always,

Daddy

As you know many men will say anything to get in your pants but some want the real thing - in terms of your talent.<P>

As mentioned below this has the measure of being a great story until the 3qtr. point when it went off the rails - just for twisty quirkiness.<P>

So given the one handed cheering crowd I doubt you will ever change to what you could be and came so close to here.<P>

But one can always hope.

Another great story. I really need to meet you one day.

I thought you told me you were on birth control oh well

Gotta say your body is still great and cant wait to get some milk out of those tit s

love ya

Scott

Your stories always get my firm hard attention!

The ending caught me by surprise on this one. As usual, I was stroking myself throughout the story. Thank you for yet another inspirational tale.

Uncle Jim

I really liked that! So diff than most romance stories on this site that are so sappy with a little gratuitous sex or no sex at all. Smooches, Suzanne Marie

Loved your story, especially the twist at the end. Hope you will consider a follow-up. Sounds like some good possibilities. Pregnant women are really sexy!! Keep up the pics! prop69/AL

on the story great job on the blow jobs lol

Sarahhhhh Sarahh wht you do to me a laugh a minute first with the varous ways to cook fish then the interesting ways to get into a blow job finally Jim and Sarah father daughter what a tail told by the Mistress of all tailes Sarah Thanks scoperri@aol.com

Yor story was so erotic that I had to unzip my pants and stroke my self... I swear that I would let you move in with me with no rent at all... I want you to watch me and talk to me as I jack off.... That is a 110% guarantee woman... you are so Beautiful and you wouldnt ever have to touch me... Just looking at you is fine with me Sarahhh...Im not hard to please... Larry...

It is frickin hilarious how you turn men into jello like that last dude Larry.Of course you and your stories do the same thing to me. Bitch! Luv ya, Sandra

Sarah,

You have created a storm warning in my pants. Severe flooding advised!

Thanks,

here cums gustav how about a sequeal with more blow jobs

This is another one of your wonderful stories. You are a master at getting into peoples minds and driving them crazy. I wish I could be with you and listen to your stories every day.

Hey you stories rock!Thanks for turning me on to them.IC Slicker from fantasy fb

Just found this site a week ago and stumbled upon your stories yesterday. Babes Gone Bad was the first one I read but I could not put a comment on it for some reason. Hot damn!

Thank You Sarahhh for a truly excellent romantic and exciting story. Through stories like this one you have worked your way up my favorite author list to the very top. Without question you are now my favorite Erotic writer.

But that's Sarahhh for you. So inventive in getting into the story, and then real heat as the "meat" of the story. I love Sarahhh's stories and this is a winner. I wouldn't mind a follow up about the menage a trois with his wife, either.

Rob B

Sarahhh has done it again, wielding her words into a story that any man would love to be a part of....not to mention posting an "almost" total photograph of herself and her lovely figure. I can only hope that she continues to contribute to Literotica for years to come!

Great twist and wit as usual Sarah. Hot story and lots of fun. Loved how you located your character in the land of the Eagles for a change. Love ya.

Paul

Sarahhh! That was great! Totally into your writing style. Love the path you went down on this story. Keep up the good work!

I always love your stories babe but this one was one of the best so far you never fail to capture the essence of the helpless little girl combined with the voracious sexual appetites of the wanton slut..... as always I loved it!!!!

D.

Sarahhh, you've done it again. Thanks for you're literate and witty approach to the genre. you always seem to make me smile as well as cum!

What do you announce me? In your beautiful body grows the fruit of our love?

Jeah, your tummy actually is lightly curved! That I

didn't get my attention. Do you surprised of that? Please, darling, remember

how you was sitting on the floor and pleasured yourself? And how you got

off?? I couldn't

resist! And when you take my dick in your hands - and between your tenderly

lips … it was overwhelming! What should I do, when you cried:

'Cum in my mouth, Tom?' - Immediately I exploded, you know? And you

swallowed

it all!

I think of licking your pussy and I enjoyed your juices! You enjoyed my

tongue,

didn't you? You talked from eating pussy, and I actually want to eat you, I

was hungry as a hunter! What wonder, as you cried because for the storm -

and want so badly the one ding, you never done! I hear you exclaim: "Oh, my

God, Take me, Tom! Tom, hurry! Take me!" Don't

you remember, how you ride me and bounced tempestuously up and down, up and

down. I remember each moment and indefinitely lust. I remember all the

kisses

and hug you favour me with.

Your red bush

seemed to be very small. In my reminder there were more hair! It tickled so

nice at my nose.. .

My beauty, a last question: what means 'titty twister'? Means the, I blow

your tits? Or what?

Hugs and kisses - and more,

Tom

awesome story. definitely a must read!

As usual a great story.

i loved this story but just wished that it had gone further into the sex after finding out the girl s the daughter and more into the three some.but still a great story and i would love to fuck the girl.....

what can i say sarah,i loved this story.Pity it wasn't longer so as to get

more into the anal and also the incestuous relationship and three some,but

once again i loved it.send me any more stoes you do please.xxx csrobinson1@hotmail.co.uk

Hello Sarah, I thought I had left you some great feedback, but I could not find it, so I am leaving one now.

This was a truly fantastic story and I would love to see a follow up or continuation, telling about what happened and the continued sexual adventures after they were out of the hurricane situation. Also how about involving the his wife with Sarah's husband and a great foursome.

Anyway, truly fantastic story! ! ! ! !

Hi Sarah, it's BrettJ. Sorry I haven't been reading or commenting lately - writing a lot more than I used to and then my computer died. Like - gone. Zilch. Lost everything.

The story is a nice little read with the twists at the end that make me enjoy it more and that I myself like to write. Bravo!

i was "blown " away by this magnificent masterpiece. Being a redhead myself there is always a lil satisfaction to be had. I just close my eyes and think of my "sarah" and my flood waters always rush to all rising occasions. My damn bursts and i become flooded all over again. what a better way to go thru a hurricane, sarahs blowing and sucking winds always come in force. Luv ya sweetheart

As always you know how to push all my buttons. I was in the loft right with them.

I've been through a few hurricane's and they weren't this much fun but I wish they had been.

Keep writing, after all you changed my life (for the better?) by getting me to write too.

Hot, hot, heat

Keep the heat cumming, and cumming!!!!