All Comments on 'Roomers Ch. 06'

Your story has me waiting with bated breath for the next installment. You have woven a terrific story.

I believe this is not a Mind Control story. Doug is a very perseptive individual that uses all his assets when he needs to. In looking for a critique, that's the best I can do.

Keep it up.

Stories like this are the reason I keep coming to this site. What a gem. Keep it up.

The first eps kind of made me feel, like is this just another mind control story. But this story is getting better and better...

A plot driven adult story. Good effort, consistent dialect usage and many memorable moments and characters.

Thanks for the fun read.

Five stars..... Superb.

Needs more swearing.