All Comments on 'Rose's Wish'

Don't write WHILE you are jerking off. It just comes out insanely horrible. Hell, I'm a sadist... and I STILL didn't like it. That should tell you something. Try proof reading before you post as well. There's a ridiculous amount of errors.

Lmfao, yes wacking off and typing Not your strong suit

Its okay, you'll get better at it.

Don't be discouraged by the critics ;-)