by tangeerine
OK, so what happened at Yom Kippur services?????? Or did having to fast and atone for your past and forthcoming sins put a damper on the affair?
I've been told that the Chaplain at Duke University recommended that the university chapel be closed at night, "because more souls were being created than saved there."
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I don't know about Duke, but I do know that sitting next to the woman who would become my wife was a major reason to go to church. There is something about being close but needing to be proper that can be... arousing. That is until they make you do that "meet and greet" thing.
There is one hole (ahhhm) in the plot. The store room would be very much locked when every one is shmoozing around like that. What are you taking the refreshments committe for?<P>
It was kind of crude and kind of simple but as fantasy goes - let the kid have some fun while adults prey... and he has (by now had) few more days to ask the husband's fogiveness (somehow I don't see it...). <P>
Hope the Shofar blows did not startle you...
You need to write another chapter on this one with the two of you creating "another soul". Remember God's instructions to Abraham....populate the world.
Hot story! I liked the narrator's character. He's got balls, that's for sure. However, pet peeve number 17 appears a couple of times: The past tense of grind is ground, NOT grinded. **Harry**
Oh, yeah, Mr. Dominant making women yours! Give me a break written by a wimp!
Alas ; ostensbly written by a Jew, but with no talent whatsoever.