by LLMartin
whoever entitled this submission is unaware that the expression 'confirmed bachelor' is a euphemism for homosexual man
Oh come on now some people don't think they want to be married....then they find the right woman. Same thing with women. I liked the story.
When Derek became Darren half way through the story, coupled with the headline ONE YEAR LATER, I assumed Ashley and Derek had parted and she was now with Darren
Editing is sooooooo important
My only issue is, It wasn't as long as I would of liked it to be , It's one thing to have a good story Butt if you don't take it as far as it can go , I think it turns kind of sour.
Did any one take the time to notice that Ashley was fucking Derek and then decided to fuck Darren in the middle of the story. Seems white girls can't get the name right of the darkie they be fuckin.
It could just be the poor racial attack made (attempted) by the author had him so worked up that he couldn't keep his "black names" straight. Either way, it was a shitty story to have wasted my time on.
Love stories where white women become black cock sluts and begin the breeding process. It's true, interracial babies are always cute . They grow up to be handsome men and beautiful women. I've also heard that interracial people are very hot in bed.