All Comments on 'Runaway Bay Ch. 02'

I sincerely hope you did enjoy "tonight" ~ AND the film... (at least as much as I'm enjoying reading your delectable stories... ).

Great story, just can't wait to read more...

Fantastic story, would love to be Mikie

Not hard to see where this wimpiness is going eh little sick one!

Wow Crystal:

These stories just keep getting better and better. I was hoping to see one of Barry's photos in you bio.

Thank you

Bill

Disappointed by this chapter after reading Chapter 1 - this chapter sounds like more of the standard stories at Literotica.

Chapter 1 was better written - descriptions and believeable.

I actually liked this chapter better than chapter 1. It appears that Barry is the force behind putting Crystal in positions that turn out very sexy. He must like watching. Maybe because of his age.