All Comments on 'Sabella & Malcolm Ch. 05'

Although others have made the comment that this story doesn't have sex; it does hold a person's interest. It is developing in a way that let's one become involved with the characters. The first installment was a little slow, however subsequent chapters have made up for it. Thank you for writing this story. It has all the hallmarks of a "keeper". Protagonist,villan, scorned woman and sympathetic romantic couple. I will be watching how it all unravels.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I really really don't understand folks who purposefully set out to destroy others or don't understand the meaning of the word no. And malcom better listen to Sabella. Stop underestimating your enemies, that's how they get ya.

This story just gets better with each chapter!

Nice twist...

love dis story.. Alwaz come back to read it.. One of my favorite

I'm completely hooked. The story flows very well and your smart writing is refreshing by not dumbing down the reader. I'm savoring Sabella and Malcolm's story like fine wine and their tender moment. Also, funny exchange between Mabel and Carolyn

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