All Comments on 'Sabella & Malcolm Ch. 07'

Enjoyed it immensely, especially the revelation about Malcolm's family. Good stuff!!

Better plot and story with this chapter.

Great chapter.

So Regina is white. That was a nice reveal. The residents of Culbert Co. sure are a nosey bunch. At least Ed was decent about his intrusion. I'll bet the Sheriff is a member of the KKK. I guess Sabella couldn't be passed off as Mabel's long lost neice or something?

I'm really enjoying this story.

-Bluegardenia

I'm pleasantly surprised, intrigued, and totally interested in the story!!!! Love the fact that she has an open portal of sorts to the present day!!!! I can say a love alittle sci-fi when done well and you've start out in such a manner. Interesting to the continuing story and the ending. Happy? Sad? SHOKING!!! Oh my. Thanks Lakergirl

You're killing me!! I love this story and you give us little snippets, albeit fabulous snippets of this story. I guess it karma because I've kept my readers waiting forever for the end of mine :-) Seriously though, I love this story...keep up the good work and give us a longer chapter - pretty please?

Kitty

these some nosey ass folks, and liars to boot. geesh

This is an amazing story. Very heartfelt! Great writing and storyline. Worthy of publication.

I am really enjoying this series!!!!

Love it

This should be made into a movie, I swear.

Wonderful way of not sugarcoating racial history. Discussing Malcolm's history was a realistic approach considering the era and history, both past and present. Again, this story leaves a good taste in my mouth. A real treat getting better and better with each chapter. I have been unable to give you less than 5*because you're quite talented and this story is wonderfully outside the box.