All Comments on 'Sahara's First Ch. 02'

by LazyDays1221

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Add in the Dad and a big black man ...

Hot stories to which the little slut's Dad should be added and more men with big cocks e.g. her Master's friends

little_lolitalittle_lolitaabout 16 years ago
black cocks

Yes, make them also whores for black cock! And some rings in their lil niples and pussies would be nice!!! Kisses, Jana

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Degrade

In other words degrade them as much as possible. No love,careing,humanity, just some mindless dog in the back yard sex. I forget how twisted some people really are. Yikes!

neioxetneioxetabout 14 years ago
fucking hot!

this series is absolutely amazing. you have great content, great ideas. you also have great character development a good plot line (which is more important than some people realize) and of course the sex scenes are fantastic. you have to keep writing, if not a continuation of this story, then a different one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Loved the story

It built up nice and the story developed. Now is the time to add Sahara's dad into the mix. I would like to see Sahara's dad become Melanie's master and see if there are other Masters and their sluts in the group that daddy has to his house.

In other words, no bondage, chaining, caging or otherwise, just young women choosing to be their Masters sexual slave. Maybe wind up swapping them for business favors but being good, kind & loving masters to the young women.

I really get turned off with the abuse written about in some stories especially when the slaves are given a choice. I do understand that some men and women are addicted to pain and I certainly don't want to read about it. Most stories go too far. Spanking for punishment is alright.

leann5redleann5redover 10 years ago
just grat

just loved the way you put it together master derrick & sahara,s and her friend .Would like to read about the parts for then maybe sahars dad get sume to that would be hot yours leann mawh xxxx

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