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"Were you a Navy Seal?"
"Yes, for twenty years."
"Wow! See I told ya Micah. Can you really kill someone with your bare hands?"
"I guess I still can, but is so messy I prefer to use a weapon of some kind. There are hundreds of weapons right in this room that can kill a man."
"No Shit!"
"I'll show you some things sometime, now I have to take your Momma to bed for her beauty sleep."
"One other thing, we were talking and we were wondering if it would be alright if we call you Pop. We call our real father Dad and we would like to call you Pop."
"Boys, I would be very honored if you would call me Pop."
- COMMENTS
MrBill36almost 6 years agoA truly delightful story, full of love and trust with a touch of erotica. Such a shame we can’t replicate that in our everyday life with all who we encounter. Thank you for your writing efforts and well done.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI stopped with "clew tracks" on the mast. The clew is the lower aft corner of a mainsail, it is the part of the sail furthest from the mast. The part of the sail that is attached to the mast is the luff.
Anonymousover 12 years agoOther comments agree - Sex scenes abound in Literotica, but nautical knowledge is rare in an author. I tried to figure out which sailboat you were using, settled on the knockabout or J-20. Both are in the USNA inventory. http://www.usna.edu/AdminSupport/Instructions/3000-3999/3120.2.pdf
You could expand on the theme in later episodes.
Thanks for a good read!
Another central Florida sailor
Scifiantabout 13 years agoThis was not long enough, it was way too short! This could be developed into an excellent (longer), 'fleshing it out' and developing the characters more.
Having said that, I really enjoyed the story ;-)
