All Comments on 'Salvation Army Lassie'

This would make a really good illustrated story, maybe he fucks Barbara in the snow next time?

While very well-written, this story is much too short, and has many possibilities for future chapters. The story would have been even more interesting if Barbara had been a member of the Salvation Army.

I've been your fan since the undertaker story and this one is my new favorite. good fetish angle, not your typical story

Wow! Good hot sex can ring the holiday bells! I don't know what story Pathetic was reading; just pity him. For me, I love this tale of sweet tail. I give it five stars and then some. It's nice to renew an old friendship at Christmas, especially if she's got a splendid rack and amazing control of her abdominal musculature -- and when you are truly, generously fond of each other. Let's all give to the Salvation Army!

Thank you for your story- it was complex ahd full of imagery which added to the story.

Boxlicker? a little more thought into a name wouldhave been better. it almost put me off from reading the rest of what turned out to be a rather good story.

I thought the opening to the story was a great lead in. I don’t believe I’m going to be able to pass a Red Kettle this year with out thinking of this story. Best of luck in the contest.