by topcattopone
Just the right mix of exposition and naughty descriptions. Sarah is a great character!
Great characters. Story got me hot and wet. Please post more.
I'm like the others. I want more of the story too! Next chapter soon, please?
Sarah and Tom have a number of adventures, but I am afraid you may have to wait as the stories all need editing and I go into hospital tonight and may not be available for about six weeks. Sorry guys!
T.
Sorry I forgot to thank you for your comments and marks. - Much appreciated.
T.
My previous message doesn't seem to have appeared. I will submit more of Sarah & Tom's adventures, but all the stories need editing and I go into hospital tonight and may not be available for about six weeks.
Thanks again for your comments and votes.
T.
Very addictive story. Really draws the reader in.
Please post more.
For future ideas, more (involuntary) public exposure would be fantastic. ;-)
Thanks again!
A perfectly paced story, with full of romance, love and exhibitionism! I am a big exhibitionist fan, and this is like a PERFECT fantasy!!
Clearly less discrete than Tom in public, Sarah is obviously a femme/domme inclined lady, well prepared to assert control?
It's a little implausible that they moved so far so fast, but the scenarios were all lovely and sensual.
I loved this. The characters were likeable and clever, and the story was realistic, sexy but within the realm of possibility, not like so many of the over-the-top, unlikely fantasies that show up on literotica. I thought that made it even sexier.