All Comments on 'Saturday Afternoon'

this started off fine however I guess I got lost someplace because it went from zero to sixty before I could blink

Wrong category. This is not non con and it reads like a 14 wrote it.

Just awful and not erotic at all. . . .instead of being aroused I was laughing at how poorly this was constructed and written.

Maybe if you submitted this in a different genre it will be appreciated, but it doesn't belong here.