by sunshine71
One where u'r not sure you should approve, or harden. Then a classic last line, and the crits die........ :-o **** :-D
Good story overall, but it was way too short. I think you'd do well if you tried to make it a bit longer.
like your stories alot.the men are tough,yet kind. the gal are totally lucky gals.totally hot fantasy stuff.
it was excally as i would want it....
seriously, i would have loved being her... my mind and soul would have belonged to him....
please keep the wonderful stories cumming
Well-written, engaging. Your description of the woods at the beginning was very poetic. My only criticism would be perhaps stick with one voice as opposed to bouncing between past/present and active/passive voice. Good job!