by Samuelx
Nice story... I don't think Muslim can do sucking? I love this story...
There is nothing wrong with the story. If you want to be a critic why don't you write something so someone can read it and provide you with ideas of your creativity.
You need to think of the poor folks at Literotica that have to read your shit in order to post it. Take a break, learn to write, get some help with your racist issues, then start writing again.