All Comments on 'Say My Name'

Very nicely written story about the need for commitment. At least for most people a relationship withers and dies without it, because otherwise it's "just sex".

The comment above said it for me. This is a short slight story, but it says a lot about male female relationships. I've seen it in here a thousand different ways.Sex is great, sex is fun, the first days and weeks and months are usually great. But it always withers and dies unless it moves to a different level. Like sharks, relationships have to move on or they die. I think it applies more to men, at least traditionally, because it's the old bit about why buy the cow if you get the milk for free. It's old fashioned as hell, but I've seen it for decades. Women, and men,willing to settle for less than commitment almost always wind up hurting. Like I said, old fashioned as hell, but the truth never gets old.

Your story is kind, in a way. I really enjoy your sense of humor your language.

I appreciate the writing you are doing. Keep it up.

Regards,

-Pultoy

It was to the point and so cute. But the ending with Danny...should have been a big bang. Didn't he want to fight for her even a little? Still 5 stars