All Comments on 'Scars Ch. 06-08'

I meant to say Please.

Stop moving around to present tense narration. It disrupts readability. Present tense I n dialog though is what is expected.

I agree with the comment about how Emily spews all the time. You also really need to learn the difference between YOUR and YOU'RE, you used the wrong one each time, every 'your' should have been you're and same with your use of 'you're' should have been 'your'.

I really only have one complaint, "Emily spews" Emily spews a lot! Maybe you could find another way to describe how she talks.

Thank you for sharing. I'm enjoying every chapter and looking forward to reading more.