All Comments on 'Scripting Tools'

I'd love to see how far Addie would let Jack take her, such as having her wear really short skirts to work or fucking during regular work hours or in public.

Thanks for reading & commenting, Sticky! I did have some ideas about other things I'd like them to do (in particular I initially imagined the dialog between "TheJackal" and "TheRector" spanning several sex scenes---that would work very well with your suggestion, & further the who's-driving-this-bus dynamic) but what you see is the result of some combination of laziness and a desire to keep it streamlined. I'll bear you in mind if I write again!

I've had some experience using hypnosis in a professional setting. It would be very hard to fake a hypnotic trance, but your lead character fooled her hypnotist and used him to her advantage. No doubt she will continue to have her way with him as she continues to instruct him by internet. Keep up the good work.