All Comments on 'Second Chance Ch. 04'

I love this story! please go on writing, I'm ready for the next chapter!

Cinder it is nice to see that you're back to writing again. I have missed you writing for the last couple of months so it seems. I like that you start writing this story again with Olivia and Jared. I like how this chapter developed with Jared becoming mad at Jason for being overprotective. I like how you described Jared becoming fatherly with Chloe. I also enjoyed how you described the relationship between Olivia and Jared and the problems that they were having. I hope you are able to read another chapter soon to describe what happens next in the story.

I sure hope you will continue with this story. Very nice work!

more please and soon!

Love the Drama. 5/5