All Comments on 'Secret Lover Ch. 04'
by zombie8cupcake
- 16 Comments
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI'm sorry, but this whole story is pretty much like almost every other interracial story on this site with a psycho ex. 1*
ariesgirlalmost 10 years agoSo I understand...Is Cole still married but has been separated from psycho Jamie? If so, did he plan on keeping Jamie a secret forever? He was about as selfish as Jamie. The only difference is that Cole had no intentions of hurting Melanie whereas Jamie did and still is.
Cole need to pull his head out of his ass and go after Jamie. I get he is focused on Melanie but as long as Jamie is in the picture they will have no peace. He need to settle his mess before moving on drama free with Melanie.
BunnyLalmost 10 years agoPlease continue! I need to see Jamie get what she deserves, and Cole needs to take action. He cannot continue to let Jamie get away with her stunts. I also hope Evan lets his brother know exactly what is going on, that way the police can get her her consequences, especially attempted murder. That way at least Cole doesn't personally confront her, because he just might lose his temper and kill her himself. Although she (almost) deserves it, he has more important things to worry about, like getting his wife back.
redlion75almost 10 years agoso why is jamie not in jail yet it has been a week? evan should have had his lawyer make a deal with the d.a. to get her off the streets before she does anything else.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI know this is fiction, but seriously. Mel is fresh out of the hospital, still recovering from near fatal injuries yet fucks Cole like the accident never happened. You mentioned having an editor, but what you need is a GOOD editor. There are still many errors in grammar and sentence structure that make this a difficult read.
Anonymousover 9 years agosomebody take that broom from that witch jamie then run her carcus off the road!!!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI loved t I dont see why people are hating I didnt see anything wrong with the chapters SOOO PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!!!
Anonymousover 4 years agoI'm glad they reconciled but here comes the crazy from Jamie. Can't wait to read about it all.
~Allegedly_Literate~
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis story is getting ridiculously stupid. Along with sex after serious injuries, it’s unreasonable that the police haven’t solved anything yet.
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