All Comments on 'Secret Pride & Prejudice Pt. 01'

I never imagined anyone would have the creativity or the guts to write a Jane Austen story on this site. I am even more surprised to see that it is quite wonderful, and somehow retains the characters while introducing far more...carnal activity than the BBC adaptation ever showed for some reason...

5 stars!

and well written. Thanks.

As a Jane Austen fan, I'm very impressed with the "flavor" of your story. I certainly wouldn't have the courage to attempt it. Wonderful job!

What Jane Austin would have written if she joined Literotica.

So funny! and still, somehow, in the style.

I loved it, off to read the next chapters now.

Love the idea that Wickham is Darcy's half brother.

It always seems to me that Mr. Collins is underestimated. He must have known very well that Charlotte Lucas was marrying for security rather than romance. Just imagine her feelings of distaste when the reality of her situation was "driven home" on her wedding night. Having been raised to be prim and proper she must now open her mouth, her legs and her bottom for her rampant husband. To be mounted , penetrated, fingered, sucked and worse must have been a nightmare for her....