All Comments on 'Secret to a Long & Happy Marriage'

by Mudak

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great begining!

You are off to a great start on your career as a writer. Never lower your standards as set forth by this story. I'm sure I speak for others when I say we look forward to your next entry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good story but....

....if the secret to a long and happy marriage is in the sex we're all in trouble!PISTOLPACKINPETE

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
True love

I was always taught never go to bed angry with your bride. After 47 years; it has paid off, and the sex has always been great. This does help save your marriage. Never cut the value of SEX short.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good Story

It is a very passionate and person story. It would be great to see more stories about their adventures with the box. What sort of things they could think of for each other and the box. It's a GREAT idea and GREAT story. A little more of the sex stories would be fun though. ;-)

TwistedPassionTwistedPassionabout 13 years ago
Kind of depressing

I liked the premise but it would have been better if you hadn't killed off the grandparents. That really ruined the romance and eroticism for me.

bumblegrumbumblegrumover 11 years ago
Fantastic

A beautiful story, well told. This could as easily have been in the Romance section as in the Mind Control, but so what. This must rank high in any "Best of Literotica" selection, and I read it with great enjoyment for the story itself and pleasure over the quality of the writing. Thank you.

southwestcavsouthwestcavover 9 years ago
A pleasant surprise

This is one of the rare heart warming stories in this category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wrong Genre

I think this should go in Scifi/Fantasy. There is a real lack of any exertion of control. Something the Mind Control genre is based on. This is just a marriage story with some magical device. It doesnt fit here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

I great story with a very positive message for couples.

kinkymousekinkymousealmost 6 years ago
Enjoyable material

Please write more of such enjoyable material frequently.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
bravo

thank you for this inspiring story .so true it is 34 yrs and the passion with the respect for one another as 2 individuals becoming one truly is the way! kudos great story . encore encore!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The truth told

Even without a box love, passion and good sex are the biggest bond. One missing leads to failure. Esther the marriage will continue halfhearted or it ends in divorce. It will never achieve the same result as a marriage with love, passion and good sex.

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