All Comments on 'Secrets of the Deep Ch. 02'

Incredible prose. The conflict of remaining true to herself at the same time that she is dealing with a complete alteration of bodily needs and abilities has been displayed both beautifully and dramatically. I cannot wait to discover if she is able to control herself with regards to her family.

Been busy with life stuff. Finally got the chance to read your new stories. You really put yourself over the top with these. Sorry I didn't write anything for the last story, but I had to keep reading. Your writing really placed me their. Its like I could see her and everything she could. It was so well writen. You have really come along with your writing. Not that any of your stories were bad by any means. Can't wait to read the next one. Just thought I should take the time to comment and to praise your writing.

Thanks

Baribrother