All Comments on 'Secrets of the Forest Nymph Ch. 06'

As they say all good things must come to and end !

This has been one great read.

Thanks,

Voyer61

A very enjoyable tale from the first chapter .Well written and fun to read. I am hoping you will continue this story with a sequel and am looking forward to reading more tales from you

you wrapped everything up nicely. I think it's time to give these characters a rest and try something else. And since you were right when you said Non Human fans are the best, try something different in this category. See if this is a category where you might be able play around and work on your author skills. Why not?

Hope you write something soon. I'll be watching.

you have a talent to involve the reader, if this were a paper book i would not have put it down ,yes this was in the non human catagory,but this contained life lessons as a sub plot, very very well done. jimwho chicago

Did awsome job. love the story.

Thank you for a second story equalling a good as the first in its own really different way. Please keep writing so that we all may enjoy your superb talent.

it was a amazing story, another one like this would be great

You actually gave me non stop goosebumbs, it was a great story with beautifull charachters. Thanks.

Incredible story, loved it all the way, you did a great job at it. I almost felt as if I was in an RPG, mixed with quite the eroticism, because let's be real, being human royalty, and in a forest where everyone has sex with everyone, hardly anyone could resist that :P

This was a wonderful story. Great imagination! You are not JazCullan, but you deserve accolades.

Great story. If you havent already you should consider picking up where this story left off. It was attention grabbing.

Your story is great but I have one little question. Why didn't Chad react to Shea's mention of the baby girl.

But I did both for this story and all the others. Is sorta like a "lifetime achievement" award at the Oscars.

Great story! Even though this is an old one of your stories, I could see you grow as a writer with every chapter. Now that "The Chosen One," is so close to being finished, You ARE right on up there with Jaz. Never let your Writing journey come to "The End," my friend. Enjoy every moment of the ride.

I agree with the others, this could lead on to a great new story

Not too bad in the dialogue area, though some of it was a bit stilted and some of it just didn't sound right; perhaps reading your dialogue aloud would help you during your proofing and re-writes.

I mentioned a plot conflict at the end of the last chapter re: the flashlight and Zippo working while the gun wouldn't. There was another that had me scratching my head for a whole on this chapter: "Chad and Feather stepped out of the tent on wobbly legs" should have been 'Chad and Shae... '

But, like all many things in life, writing gets better the more you do and a good story improves with each re-write.

Thanks for a truly enjoyable story. It had all the needed ingredients for a great read.

Please continue writing, the wait for more will be worth it.

Truly well written throughout the many chapters! And lots of yummy loving! Thank you!

Very much enjoyed your story! ❤️