All Comments on 'Seduction of Tamanna'

look forward to the continuation. Hopefully they do anal and a lot more unprotected vaginal sex. Thanks for writing!

Look forward to the follow up.

Thanks

This story is ridden with grammatical errors

we see a lot of bad writing, this ranks high among them. I thought Literotica used to decline stories with so many grammatical errors but I guess I'm wrong on that. In any event, do some studying on line before trying again...please.

Ten years ago Literotica refused stories with minor errors. Now, it seems, anything goes. Bad writing, poor sentence structure, poor grammar seem to be the norm rather than the exception. I know this is an amateur site, but still a little effort of proper writing would be appreciated. Don't read Indian stories, find them usually bad.

Can't take anymore

already expressed are enough for you to pull the plug

seems narration is good but the formation of sentences lack behind and made the story a bit bore

anyhow waiting for the next part

:P

Please write more , write details of love making and also include anal sex and how she becomes his sex slave and continue the relationship when they come back.

Post soon.

How bad can sentence structuring and grammar be?

I appreciate Indian writers putting in an effort to submit stories here, but most of them seem to care less about their English. I know they aren't native, but there's no excuse for NOT even proofreading before hitting the submit button.

This story is great and is a wonderful hot read

Hey plz continue this story 5,6,7, plz

Perfect story teller. Publish the continuation.

Awesome....

Indian porn always make me want a steak.

Pathetic writing! Too many cliches n predictable!