All Comments on 'Selection Day'

by JMaxwell69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fuck off

So who would find this shit erotic?????? I think i'll go puke and jerk off. Thank you and fuck off

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderful

i really love this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls go on

stealthgundamstealthgundamover 12 years ago
great start

i cant wait for your next chapter

Lynus399Lynus399over 12 years ago
Disgusting

Fucking horrible... I absolutely hated it.... fuck u very much

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice

I enjoyed it :) Write some more about this future world...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

as i am currently horny and writing a paper on dystopias, reading this was amazing. so sad to see it end, I feel like I could read a full novel of this. Way better than Brave New World and 1984 haha

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

So what became of Julian? Did he get selected as a breeder? Or did he become Vicky's boy?

Wisdom_SeekerWisdom_Seekerabout 6 years ago
Great Story!

Good story, and well-written too! I hope that one day you continue it further.

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