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Sir GalahadSir Galahadover 9 years ago
Long Lead-In to Small Payoff

The premise is excellent, but after leading us along the garden path the payoff is insufficient. The sex should have been more explicit and more extensive. A little more interpersonal development would have been a plus as well.

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