All Comments on 'Service Call'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice!

Mind Control stories can be boring and totally unbelievable but this story was great albiet a little short for my taste. I love Mind Control and to see someone make it interesting was a wonderful way to start my day! Thank you for writing it and sharing it on this site! (kiss kiss)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Ok idea, somewhat sloppy writing

The fifth paragraph seems to say that her ankles were made of hemp.

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