by soular
...losing my sanity. Is it bad that I've checked for updates every day in the morning before work, at night after work and at midnight? I mean, that has to be a sign of an unstable person right? There could be any number of reasons why it's not updated, but honestly at this point I don't care why. I just NEED it!!! I'm coming off as ungrateful and ridiculous, I KNOW! I've only ever felt like this with SecretFantasy69's stories and even she's not updating! I can't take it, I can't. God, I hope that everything is ok in your life, honestly I do Soular but please please update...I'm just hangin on by a thread here.
I went out of town for Christmas vacation and just knew when I got back I would have a new chapter to read. I'm not losing my sanity just yet, but I need an update now too!!
I thought I was the only crazy person checking for updates several times a day and going through withdrawal! Guess not! It's Tuesday but no Chapter 7 yet! Fingers crossed for Wednesday!
Can you PLEASE update faster??? I think I'm a junkie on your stories. Ever since I started reading them, I've been hooked. It's never taken so long for you to update. I'm nearly in tears here! I hope everything is ok with you though. But PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update, I will send you cookies!
I've read chapters 1-6 a few times while waiting for chapter 7. I think I should stop doing that. It only makes me more anxious!
I hope it's up and available soon!! :-)
~Faith
I understand it's the holidays and all, so I won't freak out on you just yet (lol). Love what I've read so far! I'll keep checking back daily. Looking forward to reading your other stories.
I am truly loving this story! it is a great storyline that works quite well. Tough Nick is falling for Vicki and he doesn't even realize it. And Vicki needs him to "step up to the plate" if he is going to get serious about her. I like that she is working at being independent...but can she have her cake and eat it, too? LOL. Please give us another installment. It has been quite a while since the last one. I am really ADDICTED TO THIS STORY!
Soular, darling, I’m sure that what commenters 100-109 and many others, who must have no idea of the pressure they are putting on you, meant to actually say was that they are so appreciative of the time you take to write, they understand the HUGE undertaking it is to put just one, little chapter together and they understand you are doing it for FREE and that you have a JOB and a LIFE. They are, I’m sure, even as they were typing their comments, PMing to offer you money to hire a maid and even take over your job and cooking and laundry so that you can sit in front of the computer round the clock typing them stories! I’m sure they don’t really care more about your stories than they do about you, a real life human being! You’re a great writer, please don’t let us burn you out. We want many more stories for years and years to come. Thanks!!
In others... My fingers n toes are not enough for me to count the number of times on me checking for your new updates everyday knowing well tht you'd told us when'll it be out. Someone do help me!
All I can say is …WOW. I’m thoroughly impressed by you at this point. This is not just “erotic” literature or strictly interracial it’s a romance in its purest form. You’ve really found a way to leave an impression and make people want more.
You wear me out Soular, i need to take a break, but not for long, the 2 lovers are soooooooo exciting, and as for Sonny, the dick, but at least he caused the hot couple to briefly unite.
This story is SO good. And Nic is a dumb ass.
Nic, step up and out of your comfort zone. Man up an d tell her the truth-will you???
My girl has finally manned-up.
Tone up the characters, they seem very one dimensional and immensely stereotypical. We get only fractured glimpses of their potential.
The interracial plot line is very shallow, this story could be in any section.
On the positive, writing style is immersive and the situational descriptions vivid.
I was going to wait until I finished the series to comment, but I couldn't wait. Your an amazing writer.I love all the characters. I love how you included more Antonio. My mans gonna take my laptop away if I don't stop saying no he didn't. Lol. So I hope your going to write another series...just saying :)
You should really think about getting your work published. This was a great read. I went through so many emotions reading this. I cried, and laughed. I can truly feel the connection that they have as I am reading. I love the story! You are a great writer and I look forward to reading more from you!
I know I'm a late reader, but for the life of me, I cannot determine which story I like better- "That Damn Dress" or "Seven Days".
I am rereading this story and I have a problem with this scene. While i admire your writing and this relationship, this scene is triggering because victoria kept saying no, yet nic continue to go on despite victoria's protest. I am not staying you intentionally created that scene in this manner, but it was a little uncomfortable to read.
Nothing wrong with this chapter - it's perfect! You have gained an extra fan and I'm telling everyone I know about your work. You work is way better than some of the published stuff I have read - really criminal!
I don't understand the appeal... At all. Victoria started out good but wow, she's so dumb. How many times do you have to get shit on before you quit seeing these people at all and start fresh. Nic has only done two nice things for her this entire story that didn't end with him calling her a slutty gold digger. I could see her ending up with paul and or Antonio before Nic. I can't believe anybody would like a manipulating ass like him. He says "come with me" pulls her anywhere, gets in her pants immediately. Then Calls her a gold digging whore... Leaves. She cries. This repeats itself. That's all that happens in this story yet people are all like "I love Nic." WTF!
I agree. Nick is a pathetic excuse for a human being. I don't see how any woman--outside of a work of fiction--would stay with him. Sure he might be good for a weekend, or to fulfill some latent, hidden fantasy, but definitely NOT someone that a woman marries.
Miss Victoria was wanting it just as much as Nick, she was just still very mad at him, but when you have chemistry, your body over rides your anger, then after the anger returns lol. To Soular, this would be my most other fave story, the other story was taken off here and published i purchased it on amazon and i would readily purchase this story if you decided to publish, tho i have re read many times, such an awesome read girl.
Wait! You have stories on amazon??? What are the titles??
I love this story and I read it over and over again. Thank you for giving a me little taste of heaven for when I'm stressed out!
I just wanted to say that I love this chapter so much, especially when Victoria tells Nic she loves him. I just can never get over that scene
Do you realize you left that comment after chapter six of a ten chapter story? Does that mean you think it should end after the next chapter?
god damnd. Nic is such a pussy. he can earn tons of Money BUT he may never ever again meet such a wonderful Lady like Victoria. so different from all the bitches around nic who only want his dick and Money. I hope Jimmy or someone else give him a friendly kick in the butt so he gets his stuf together and sets priorities in life. 5 stars btw.
I love this story so much but omfg Victoria is so irritating at times! She doesn't want to rely on men yet she jumps from one guy's house to another guy's house. Gosh, but i really do love this story!!
If I could give you a award for the best story, I would have given it to you cause this is literally a masterpiece
This should be an entire fucking novel! Its so perfect! Please make it a novel!
Victoria is hands down the most absolutely pathetic heroine I’ve ever read about in my entire life. Just…totally pathetic in every way…
The way you have me hooked is insane. I’ve been straight reading this for hours. I have a test in the morning. You should write a book.
I am a rereader but what occurred to me if if Antonio said no…Nic would have killed him and still found a way in.