All Comments on 'Seven Days of Service - Day 03'

I just wanted to say thank you for this terrific story. I'm in a hurry to read the next chapter, but I just wanted to give a quickie at least :)

MastersWench

Good writing. My only beef is the seven days thing. I think seven days is too short to change her, eg just two/three days for her to start to feel uncomfortable about her collar being temporarily removed doesn't work well for me. It's a shame the plot couldn't have conjured up a longer period, eg 'I have an idea' by tomtame is, in my view, the best I've read on the site for combined writing and reasonableness of plot. Never mind, virtually all these stories are right out there, OTT, fantasy. I'm loving it. Good, even paced writing is essential for me, and you are doing that so far.