All Comments on 'Sex and the Capital Ch. 14'

to like this story. So I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

This has to be the best story I have read on here since I started on LIT back in 2001.

The quality of the writing is exceptional, its at a level beyond just a sex story, in fact the sex becomes the back story to the main political wheeling and dealing, its good enough to be a erotic novel in its own right, please send it to a publishing house, its as good as anything that my wife reads...!

Well done...!

so the slut's upset about him but isn't going to come clean about her own affair? shit they are both assholes and should be divorced.

...to a well written work. Among this is in the top 3 or 4 series that I have seen here. This includes both the technical writing side and the pace of the story. As noted earlier, this could be a so-called romance novel (although a little to the detail might have to be "cleaned up"). I am eagarly awaiting Chapter 15. I make sure to come to the site at least every other day.

Lonesomedove, your novel has been a smashing good write about what's become so mundane (sex, lies and politics). Your writing is exceptional from several perspectives. You certainly have a strong sense of the elements of authoring (sentence and paragraph structure, transition, dialogue, character psychology, pace, suspense and so forth). Your works are exemplary of modern fiction. (both erotic and non-erotic). Well done. This novel, in my opinion, is the pinnacle of all writers at this site. Thank you.

I see her affair as a plot point to level the playing field (even if Bruce never finds out). Bruce cheated not once but TWICE. And it wasn't quickies but he wined and dined Kathy and the same with Brittney.