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"Well you seem in a good mood this morning," mom said.
"Yeah," I replied
"Want to tell me about that naughty dream of yours," she asked with a twinkle in her eye.
"I don't want to embarrass you," I said.
"Sweetie I've been around the block a few times I doubt you'd shock me," she said.
I looked at Adura and she nodded so I shrugged and launched into the first dream leaving out the fact it was Aunt Gina I was fucking. I went into graphic detail and left nothing out. When I was done I could see mom biting her lip and her cheeks a little flushed.
"Well that was intense to be sure," she said her nipples poking at the material of her shirt. "Maybe I should check your back for claw marks just to be sure."
I turned away and lifted up my shirt as mom got to her feet and moved close, real close. I could feel her breath on my skin as she bent to examine my back.
"All you have to do is Wish," Adura said.
"I Wish..."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoYou constantly miss periods and commas. To neglect these things distorts meaning and disturbs the flow. I highly recommend you find someone or something to edit your work.
Anonymousover 5 years agoNO ONE would be flying a private aircraft in ANY hurricane, much less a Cat 5. Look what happened in the Florida panhandle when hit by a Cat 5. The only aircraft found flying in ANY hurricane is a highly modified C-130, with highly trained pilots and crew, designed specifically for measuring the internal characteristics of the hurricane. To state that a woman was flying an aircraft in a Cat 5 at the beginning of the article makes reading the balance of the article ridiculous and a waste of time. Maybe the writer would better use the moniker "dead brain".
rightbankover 8 years agothere are so many different threads already open and unresolved that it is impossible to go in all those directions. Did they take the cash, the book, and or the skull to the bank? no footprints? no image in the mirror? visiting the shop to learn from a man who seems to shift in and out of phase but does nothing to help them understand the text. meanwhile they come across a lamp that isn't a lamp?
uhm
Anonymousover 10 years agoAmazingly good! Im chomping at the bit to read the next two chapters! Yesterday I finished reading one of your other stories... The name escapes me (my memory, ugh!) with the guy with silicon based dna, and it was fucking awesome! ...cant wait for more chapters... I had a fit when I realized you havent gotten past chapter three yet!! I was highly impressed with the awesome sci-fi/fantasy story blended well with what I thought was going to be just a sex story involving hypnosis. Ironically I usually avoid hypnosis stories as I have gotten bored/irritated with a lot of them, but this was off the charts cool!
The second version of the cellphone with AI had me rubbing my hands together with excitement! Indestructible (well...) and encoded to him, the cool tech ideas had me salivating for more of it in the future of the story. ...then quit rubbing my hands together and put one back in my pants for other parts of the story ;)
My only complaint (if you want to call it that) is sometimes too much sex, or over-descriptive; at least in relation to mom and sister over and over again. Love it, mind you (though usually mom/son usually turns me off some) but I feel the story, unless its something new/unique with them, would flow better with shorter versions of repeated sex with those two and more of the bitch conquests (gawd I cant wait for the next one!) and on with more of the excellent plot/sub-plots of sci/fant. !!
Excellent writing and storytelling skills my internet friend and high praise for well written, long stories! Write on!!
M@
Anonymousabout 11 years agoexcellent mix of passion ,mystery, occult and fantansy!!!! please keep the story going ,wonderful read!!
