All Comments on 'Sex Wrestling Couples'

Wow. Great story. Maybe the best mixed wrestling story I've ever read. Great pace, great action. Great story line. I like how Heather way toying with Laurie as she sucked off Don. I loved the mind games both female wrestlers were using. I can't wait for the next story. Was sorry to see them lose, but it was their first match.

i personally find the rules a little bit too complicated... and also, too much sex and not enough of the "wrestling" bit to me. still, an erotic read about forced orgasms... not bad

I liked it. My only suggestion would be get the men more involved in the match. I felt like there should have been more action between them. Solid story looking forward to reading more

The men being more involved would be good, I agree, but you obviously put a lot of thought into it and it's great writing!

Please keep going!

Sam

I really enjoyed your first submission and hope you keep writing. I'd also like to see more inclusion of the men and agree there needs to be more wrestling in the story.

I love this story so far hope you can update as soon as you can.

Found it realistic that the "newbies" would loose their first match, even if it was close. That written, none of the characters were exactly likeable; Don & Laurie were despirate & the ones they saw &/or faught against tended to be heels to one degree or another.

I loved the story. Even though I new what was going to happen in the end I was glued to my seat reading every word. I can't wait to see what Happens next

Sure hope you post these in my club sometime man, this was truly epic

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Stone

This was great. I really want to see your next story. Please get it our soon.

I hate to see someone write a real good story such as this and then quit. Come on you can come up with some different story lines. She could wrestle with her or his brother while her husband recovers or he has recovered and is more determine than ever to do better and they really work hard to improve. Then let them draw an easier couple. After a couple of matches have a revenge match with the flex.

If wrestling on TV was like this,I'd become a big fan! (With a constant hard, big dick!) Great story! Looking forward to Pt. 2!