by ~Breathe~
Jesus Breathe .........are you trying to give me a heart attack
This is fantastic babe....can't wait for part 3
Time for another cold shower
I'm hesitant about the BDSM category. No offence to those who love it, it's just not my scene. I was pleasantly surprised when I dipped my toe into this and found Breathe's tale here. Very erotic piece,dear lady. I am enjoying the whole build up as your chapters progress. Please, please keep on submitting.
GA.
Breathe, you are unbelievable! I can see everything you're talking about and experience all of the feelings & emotions just by reading your words. Baby, I'm yours!
Your1Guy
While i enjoyed your first piece more, this was extremely erotic and, like the first, erection inducing. I'd write a longer comment but i'm in a hurry to get to the next chapter!
I loved this, easily visualised without being over the top, fantastic work
A very arousing chapter indeed... It most certainly does give one thoughts. Very well written as well, congratulations!
Who would have thought a cuppa would be so erotic! Very nice and sexy.