All Comments on 'Sexy Shoes Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Girl Friend Squirted over this

I have a hot sexy mom g/f and i had her read this and she squirted all over herself. keep up the good work. we can't wait for chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Love this! Sooo HOT, I can see that slutty bitch getting fucked into oblivion by her hugely hung son - what mother wouldn't with all that big, young, virile cock on offer?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A lot of a mindless drivel.

Pathetic and inept. One of the worst!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
You need a proof reader.

He was in her presents? It’s in her presence. And he was a loosely father? Lol. It’s a lousy father. Not bad as far as erotica. A little sophomoric. But get an editor. You need one.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Incest author fails miserably at writing LW.

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