All Comments on 'Shadow School Ch. 08'

This is getting better and better. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Je vous protégera, même à partir de moi-même ? translation pls >_<

Getting better and better. Luv it lambie keep it comming. :)

Take Care and thks 4 tha story.

"I will protect you, even from myself."

am realy enjoying this tale.

please continue.

thanks. ;0)

THE BEST CHAPTER YET!! It was FANTASTIC! Please keep going and SOON:-)

I know it takes a While to write a good story. You need Plot, Charters Both Active and Semi active, settings, Backgrounds, and i good mind to put them all together. Well You seem to have that for this Series.

When can we expect More?? Your a Great story teller. While I love this series Have you thought about writing More Non Erotica? It would be a Shame to lose you But i think you would be great!

You have a pretty unique take on the paranormal world. I think it might sell quite well. Good luck. Can't wait to read more.

Good thought that one. Certainly has merit.

A few things you might want to take care of, if you want it to be good and not run away from you:

1. Set an ending. Think now how the overall story arch you are building is going to end. If you don't the story will most likely loose focus at some point.

2. Set a premise for your story. Some sentence that the whole story boils down to, that you want to prove within your world. It can be as simple as 'Love conquers all enemies' or something more complex. Doesn't matter as long as you like it.

3. Develop background for your characters. Sit down and write their life story up to t=0 at the beginning of your story. Suggested length for a novel is 70 pages for main protagonists and 20 for secondary.

4. Think of the antagonist(s). Do you want them to have overwhelming trouble with wolves? Someone more badass? Maybe some fanatic human faction hell bent on destroying the school? Think about it and write about them to. 30-50 pages are suggested here. To some extent you can do 3. and 4. alongside with writing the story, but you run the risk that you have to edit changes later on.

5. If you are really serious about turning this into a novel, read 'How to write a damn good novel'. I forgot the authors name, but the title should be readily available nearly anywhere.

And lastly, good luck and, more importantly, a good muse. I know what I'm talking about there. My muse has been naughty lately. Taking unexplained leave.

And you wrote a good chapter here. Keep that up.

That was the greatest chapter yet of this story and I for one wait with baited breath for the next chapter.

Love love love love... and I really can't say more. :)

Way cool! I can't wait to learn about school life and rivalries. I love the distinctness of the characters

Make it a book an I will buy it. This is amazing, and I don't think I've kept up with an ongoing story on this website for a long time.

I have to hand it to you, I didn't see this coming. As a matter of fact it kind of turns me off to the story too, even though this really adds some depth to it. A good move on your part, my own squeamishness at the thought of what having a baby does to a young person's life aside.

outragiously SPECTACULAR.!..

MAKE IT A BOOK-I WILL BUY IT, IT IS AMAZING!!!!!!

This is quite a story! I can't for more!

I'm looking forward to seeing how the story progresses from here.

...since I stumbled across it a number of months ago. So good to find another update. It's really original and with so much potential to go further! I don't want this to sound like an insult, but it's a little like a superior adult Harry Potter! (part of me wonders if loud alarm bells will go off now that I've mentioned HP!)

I am particularly loving the story between Cameron and Elias - its very sweet. But am intrigued to find out what is going on generally with the planned abduction of the seven. It's such a cool story!

Look forward to the next.

I think going from teenager to mother of a damphire would be cause for just a little bit of freakout, plus Cameron seems to be someone that would be a little put out at having to be a mother instead of continuing any career goals.

And I think her vampire is a dick for jumping her bones and knocking her up in the highly confused state she was in when they concieved. I wouldn't call it wrong but mabey selfish. Anyways it makes your characters more human even if I don't like it as much. I just hope that it was a planned story element instead of just something I picked up

reading just now, not really into the pregnancypart, as it makes her kinda into a victim. But thank god for Kristie, the other females are to much of a freudian wet dream.

Well written, and interesting. Liking the males ; )

So i stopped being into vampires s few years ago when i was like 15, but this....this is just full of yes. I love the character's, the plot also reminds me slightly of hp, and even when i described the plot to my boyfriend, i recommended him to read it even though he doesn't typically like the non-human genre. But its definitely its own. Love it keep writing and if you do decide to make a book or two, i will totally buy it!

Personally, I don't think you need to follow all of those rules or read a book about how to write a book, that just sounds silly. It could be a short novel, or with the way this is going so far, I could see a lot more ahead and I could see how this story could carry on a bit. I don't think the characters really need background, the mystery of everyone is what makes this so intriguing.

I truly hope you make it a book, and be sure to let everyone know what you'll call it (unless you'll keep the name) because I sure as Hell would love a copy!

Honestly, I'm an aspiring author (not of erotic novels xD) and writing like this inspires me to go write something right now!

Anyways, I thouroughly enjoy this story and can't wait to get to the end. Keep it up! :)