All Comments on 'Shadows and Light Ch. 08'

Great update. It's nice to hear that Isobelle is starting to heal physically from her experience. And I liked the concept of her using her art (sketching, etc.) to get some of the painful images out of her mind and onto paper. <br><br>

As to Ian trying to unlock the mystery of Cullen - that should be very interesting. I like the slow development of both characters very much, and the introduction of interesting side characters (Finn and Simon). Great job.

The complexity of your story line is growing with each chapter... i like the way you draw out the personalities a little at a time.

I have an editorial suggestion. Your conversations would flow better and be easier to read if you used 'contractions' instead of writing out each word to it's fullest. as an example:

"Yeah, well I guess I will have to get the chainsaws out then," said Finn only half jokingly.

^^^ Yeah, well I guess I'll get the chainsaw out then!" said Finn, only half joking.^^^

I'm enjoying this story very much, please update soon?

Great Job:)