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"A...lek...." She broke down in sobs immediately making him very frightened and very worried about her well being.
"Mya?! Mya what's wrong...do you need me to come get you? Where are you? What's going on."
"I...I'm...I'm..."
Aleksandr's eyes slowly closed when he knew what she was trying to avoid saying. He had a sick feeling in his gut and he decided to say it. "You're pregnant?" She screamed and sobbed harder and Alek got up and quickly ran from the house and got in his car and sped to her house. He had to make sure she was alright.
Well my friends, I truly hope you enjoyed the latest installment in my series. It's a bit slower than my lovely counterpart but I hope you like it all the same. Happy reading!
- COMMENTS
HexingGirlabout 11 years agoThat the ending is a CLEAR cliff hanger? That means there is going to be another fucking stories, you dipshits. Oh, and way to comment as Anons. Classy, real classy.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI agree with the timing, I think that was an issue. Thank you for your writing I enjoyed your stories. I look forward to reading your future writings. I feel, that does not mean I am right, that there should have been more dialog when he walked in on her with the porn on. There should have been some bumbling or embarassed comments esp from her. I read the line "X-two blissful and sexless weeks later -X-" this is confusing. Blissful would not = sexless.... was that an error in typing otherwise were you tying to convey that the went on their merry way without considereing sex again??? Why would they not consider sex again, he broke out the anal on their first night/second time, does not make sense. Again this is just me. Then she is pregnant. Are this not adults, why was this not discussed. It makes them look like idiots or that she is a gold digger. He rushes to she is she is okay...to support or to abort??? You put so much time and sweat into this and yet I feel that you cut corners at the end and left your own characters hanging. Again I would read your future stories and hope that over time you develop in to a good writer. As of now I feel that this is a stronge story that re-written could be a great 7-10 page or 3 chapter romance/coupling. Even the jerk co-work could been more developed into the story with an evil or supportive twist. DO NOT SELL YOUR WRITING SHORT, don't just finish it just to get it done. Write for yourself first but remember that it is for others to enjoy. THANX
LordGriseabout 11 years agoThe last comment was anonymous; my guess is whoever either wanted a quick story or isn't into romance. This is not an anonymous comment. I like the story thus far; the timing is perhaps a bit strained in points, (I'd have given her a couple months in his employ, perhaps noting he always ate alone and usually the same things, before offering to do dinner) but you have a plot, it advances nicely, and I would like to see part two!
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