All Comments on 'Shemale Surprise'

i just can't wait to read more about hos Mia and Angela will use Theis couple

Can't wait to see where this ends up, I would think a multi-part story - His night, Mary's night and then their night together win Mia

I cannot wait for the rest of this story. This has been a fantasy for me and my wife for years. So hard now.

Just keep going I loved it come, come, come on give me more

This story has the potential to go in two directions. 1. the way the husband wants it to go where he and the wife are involved with multiple people. or 2. where the wife controls all things sexual and turns her husband into a complete cuckhold and she has all the fun and he has none with the possibility of losing her to lesbians with bigger strapon's and her soon to be shemale lover who's cock is much bigger and probably can last a lot longer then the husband and he could potentially lose everything.

This storie was so hot please gives us some more of these sexy people

Hot story, I hope you continue with these characters.

Yes, you got got comments.

What others saw as too obvious I saw as foreshadowing. Yes, it was a bit not too subtle. You can work on being more leading and less cliche.

Story kept me going. Not believable, but a good read. Really folks? This is a fiction forum. Do you expect complete coherence to societal norms and likely situations? It's a fantasy!!!

I agree faggot was out of place and offensive. Please don't do that.

- K

What a wonderfully hot tale!

Great wonderful erotic tale it had everything.hope you can write more.xx cindy

Wow no chance for him. i felt like him

Was that ever so hot! I loved it!

your one hot writer , has so much to come for this story can note wright for chapter 2 I would love see in that mead of yours, mm well if you can thing up a mix od shemale transgender anal oral and stocking fetish and little bit of lesbian sex who knows that you come up with but its jut a fab read . yours leann5red mawh xxxx

This story is just so erotic. I really hope for a sequel or a part of story on Mary's end of phone

This was absolutely the hottest story I think I've ever read! It had everything for me. Hot shemales, younger/older lesbian sex, and possible incest. I just hope it spawns a sequel or 2!

Although the scene was anti climatic as it was mostly a given that Mia was the title character from the beginning the story maintained attention and the twists have certainly set up many possibilities for sequels.

Again...all things considered another 5star rating.

Great story! Hope there is more in this series.

Amazing story - loved it from start to finish - hoping there will be much more to come, especially n this series

While I greatly enjoy your work as a whole and was excited to see that you wrote another story in this category, I was let down by this story. For me it was less about the lack of surprise for the reader (the protagonist was surprised), and more about the tone and subject matter. In my opinion, it is a great fallacy that "Crossdressers" are in the same category as (male-to-female) "Transsexuals." While I can comprehend that transvestism is a likely early stage of a transition, I see "crossdressing" as a sexual fetish and "transsexual" as a gender (and just as capable of different sexual orientations as genetic male or female). I find your portrayals of (lesbian) submission erotic and intriguing; but as erotica, I found it unappealing sexually.

Vocally (commenters), if not in numbers, straight males are a minority of this category's readers; but male submissiveness (you understand it fully as the true fetish exists) just doesn't appeal to me.

If anyone considers it relevant, I am a heterosexual male who is also attracted to (certain) feminine female-to-male transgenders, and I have zero attraction to males.

IT IS LIKE YOU WENT INTO TO MY MIND AND WROTE MY GREATEST FANTASY

Pay no attention to the people who say it's not the greatest ! I still hold out for the day when I meet someone like Mia, and I hope she has continuing adventures here !

An interesting story, but no real "surprises" to be found. The ending and reveal were telegraphed from the first page, which took any tension or mystery out of the remaining story; just waiting for "the other shoe," the one we all knew existed, to drop.

Decent story; outrageously unbelievable; telegraphed from the first page.

I like your other stories, but I love this one. I would love to find out what happens after he starts following Mia to the elevator.

I am a big fan of yours anyway but this has to be one of your best stories I really enjoyed the whole she-male situation

Thank you

Not into she-males but am getting there. Would like to see a 2nd chapter detailing Mary's week-end from her POV. Include her return home and encounter with Mia while Robert watches.

loved your story....very hot. hope there are more chapters to come

Definitely need to do a sequel with the wife involved. However, I agree with what Jocelyn2tg said about calling the husband a faggot - not cool. Just because you're into t-girls doesn't mean you're attracted to guys at all, and the mere suggestion of it is a total turn-off. Besides, the word 'faggot' just has too many bad connotations to be sexy. It's just an ugly word all around.

If you do a sequel, though, I think it would be hot if you had the husband cum in Mia's ass and have Mary suck it all out, and then have Mia do the same to Mary. Whatever you do, though, please do not feminize the husband or make him do anything with a guy.

Love this story please continue it with the wife's point of view and her weekend and Mia dominating them both!!! Love all your stories!!!

More more more. Please write more adventures with Robert Mia and his wife. She males are my greatest sex fantasy.

...As are most of your stories, excellent character development, well done storyline, and interesting (and erotic) situations galore! But it faded pretty quickly three quarters into it with all the BDSM descriptors thrown around. I'd have to assume his wife wanted his humiliation... no? Certainly came out of nowhere as he had not expressed anything along those lines, but then it was just all in fun... or was it, I just was really confused by the end, and the faggot references finally made it unreadable for me. Gave it 4 stars for the excellent writting... and hoping you'll try again.

This was really hot! I liked the build up with Mia flirting and slowly pulling him in, and then dropping the bomb on him that she is actually a shemale. I also like how open Mary is, and wish my girl were that kinky and willing to explore things lol that being said, I'm really looking forward to reading more. I can't wait to see Mia fuck him and Mary as well.

Ho. Lee. Smokes.

What a great story I came twice

It would be great to have this story continue. I would love to find out what happens to Robert and his wife.

Wish the brunette was also a shemale and had a 12" snake and they both did him as well as hiss boss.

Then i wish i was him and made into there cum slut ass slave, for real!

jamie in phx

And a smidgen of believability would have been appreciated, too.

This is an incerdibly hot and erotic story. I've had the pleasure of being taken by a few Shemales, one just yesterday, and have to tell you that it is amazing. I hope you follow with part 2, or at least a sequel telling about how Mia takes Robert and Mary to a new level of debaucherie.

HOT! HOT!! HOT!!! More please! Soon!

Hot story!

love to be used by she-male and give my wife up-to